Friday, February 09, 2007

not for sale

The world’s hands pressed on windows

Subjugate the golden soul with the banal-

The gleam marred by oily fingerprints

And now only reflecting this seedy caul.


The worn fray of want that held the price

Can only increase your deluded desire-

Its tactile warmth from mmm friction

Is the faux cool of a choked fire.


This store is closed, but the market is open

To pander to your narcissistic caprice-

Browse the catalog and Read the signs:

“Look elsewhere for your selfish peace.”

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3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think this poem is one of your best, the choice of words is stellar. I think this is my favorite, really well done.

17 February, 2007 07:51  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I found myself thinking of this again, long after reading it. This is something special. I was looking over one of my favorites, the prophet, by kahlil gibron something within reminded of your poem. Perhaps you can indulge yourslef in some selfish time and read or re-read a classic.....busy bee, whatever you were "thinking" at the time, go there again and create another one like this, please??

18 February, 2007 17:47  
Blogger brio said...

i'm glad that this poem has garnered such attention. ironic statement i suppose.

interesting (i supposed that's relative) side-note: this poem's original look is a la ee cummings with spacings and lines surrounding the inner stanza. too much trouble to capture that in html.

18 February, 2007 18:36  

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